Many choices, yet one life,
begins with every day.
Sidetracked by hurt,
riddled with strife
as my dreams drift away.
A pace so fast and furious,
fragments are revealed.
Frightened by answers
and yet curious,
what has life concealed?
Perhaps I have seen it all,
my hopes yearn for more.
For when I stumble
and as I fall,
I've nothing to explore.
Life holds so much more!
A contest entry
- I. LIFE by Naridill.
800 points, ended January 31, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Uplifting inspiration, very beautiful. I also adore the background - reminds me of a book a read once, which your poem also reflects nicely
Thanks for entering,
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i really liked this.
you have great rythm in this!! a great write
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this is a very good poem that you have written. I have missed your writing. I like this stanza:
Perhaps I have seen it all,
my hopes yearn for more.
For when I stumble
and as I fall,
I've nothing to explore.
and the last line I really love it.
good luck in the contest.
kat
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what?? you're not finished yet?? what is taking you so long, hmmm.. I will wait to give you clappys until you are done writing..
kat
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