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'Farewell, The Crimson Tide'

'Farewell, The Crimson Tide'

What beauty tolls the sky
So white in weeps
The suns own glare
Could not awake
For farethewell you speak
As crimson waves they take
As angels herald
A lost, forgotten, angel being soul.

©Nicolette Everett 1/18/08

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Thank Manu for inspiration!

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 22, 2008

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    A very beautiful poem. Lovely imagery to make it a delightful read. Thank you for sharing. You take care, Sandy


  • Thunder Child
    January 20, 2008
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    wow

  • piccola silver member
    January 20, 2008

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    beautiful as always. I get lost in your poetry trying to figure out what it all means and then when I do, I am left with a "wow". great job. Short but filled with beautiful imagery.