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However (For Caleb)

Of all the:
other people I could be with
other lives I could be leading
other jobs I could be working
other ways I could be destroyed

there is nothing I would rather be doing now
than being here with you.

Author notes

Ap name: rsheafer
And I'm lying.

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  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 22, 2008

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    great write, short and sweet like i like it....
    i also like how you wrote it to be sincere sounding,but just one line give it away that you're not sincere at all. [other ways i could be destroyed]

    thanks so much again for entering!

    Tasha


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 19, 2008
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    short & simple and real,
    thank you for entering.
    will comment more at the end

    Tasha