A vivid memory
is all we'll ever be
i walk past you
owning the invisibility,
the silence of unrecognition
quietly kills me,
but i won't speak out,
because one try
gives me ten doubts,
one thought
brings too much worries,
leaving me knocked out,
i'd love to say things and mean it
but theres always secrets
hidden between it,
do you see it?
we sit near each other
but i sink into the backgroud,
my voice gradually drown,
and I remain unnoticed,
but you're different,
always center, on focus,
yet why do i love it?
i remember how close we use to be
those summer days
just you and me
but now it's all just
a vivid memory.
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Child Hood Love Option
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Sad... sometimes it seems like we could be better off forgetting what we remember. But we're always fond of our childhood memories, because even if they hurt, there's always something there worth remembering.
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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I really like this part
"i remember how close we use to be
those summer days
just you and me
but now it's all just
a vivid memory."
I like how u related it to the past and then said "but now it's all just
a vivid memory."
Good job. Good luck
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