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To the point.

So many ways to say goodbye,
so many ways to make me cry,
Why did you choose that one?


Those tired old cliche's,
its not you it's me,
while all the time our relationship was not two but three,
if i could make you concrete boots and put you in the sea !!


It still wouldnt make me feel better.

Moping, crying, cheating, lying, degenerate bastard.
I
I
I
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I
I
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I

I FUCKING HATE YOU!!!

















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  • Nephlim
    January 29, 2008

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    Ow. and Wow, definitely felt the different emotions floating in this poem, sorry if this happened to choo =(
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • creationsfromheart
    January 21, 2008

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    ouch, I think many times when we thought we have lossed we really have gained, something better does come along...


  • DeathlyAngel
    January 19, 2008
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    I can relate somewhat. I'm sorry u feel this way but this well get better. Good luck