the hours
'twixt light and dark,
past exhaled, present waiting
for hidden excitement to crack
pale dawn.
bright morn:
the day spread out
with expectation's glow
ideas bursting round my thoughts
bubbles.
today
lives afresh
interest flares in flames
lighting thoughts in hidden corners;
my day.
years gone
leaving new space
where the heart kindles love
for desperate people hoping
to live.
deep breath:
today spells living
no time to drift and droop
tomorrow beckons more of me
until ........
A contest entry
- Twilight by Laura Lamarca.
500 points, ended January 23, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I'm in Cinquain Heaven!
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~ Nicky♥
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Hallo Nicky: thank you for your lovely comment. Am delighted that you like these. Joy
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This is beautiful and fully captures the essence of the given inspiration...an excellent entry into this contest indeed. Good luck in the judging. Laura x
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