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Ethereal Guises

 

 

 

The edges of eternity unravel

as dark matter flows towards the moon

and particles of dust slowly travel

towards the sky, like a lost balloon.

 

Souls stand at the world's edge

and stare into wraith-like questions

that flow through the rustling sedge

whispering their ghostly suggestions.

 

Incorporeal beings laugh in the dark

at the cruel folly of human life

and sentinels stand, grim and stark

bodies rigid in their eternal strife.

 

Clouds dust the deep ebony skies,

cloaked in the embrace of mother Nyx.

And the world bids its final goodbyes

as it is banished to the shores of Styx.

 

Gentle hands gather the poppies

and hold them in lavender sent capes

where the petals fall, millions of copies

transforming to stars in their escapes.

 

Nyx, night personified.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Picture- 'I am Standing on the Edge of the World' by Lucie Stara

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  • Peteskid gold member
    February 3

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    yes have to agree with Gaylene you have done a wonderful piece of writing here to blend so many meaningful ideas into a poetic tapestry ... this is excellent...PK

  • Oh this is truly beautiful Such stunning imagery you have woven with your words. Thank you so much for your entry
    Gaylene

  • nilav
    February 1
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    great poem .....the flow and rhyme outstanding..


  • Ellis gold member
    January 20

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    OUTSTANDING -- Excellent Writing

    You take in all of time and space. Brilliant poem. The abab rhyme is wonderful (that isn't easy to write).
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  • intanglio2ring
    January 19

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    Wonderful

    So complete with your knowledge of Dante's inferno.
    A true pleasure to read & enjoy!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • markgrif gold member
    January 19
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    A beautiful fabric woven...
    Loved reading it.

    Be Well
    Mark

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