and still
I cannot get past
uttering your name
without capturing
the trembling of a sigh.
Author notes
Prompt: Heavy Sighs.
A contest entry
- widows..& widow,ers poems only......pw,s & new writes... by Honeydew.
600 points, ended May 28, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice write ..thank you for your entry -
This is quite good. It seems that with your shorter poems I am never stricken with any sort of need to give you any sort of critique. I like it exactly as is.
Well done, well done indeed.
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Well, that settles it, you are an epic writer and I'm a snapshot writer.
I stuggle to keep an idea going for any length of time, hense me not writing stories...though I can dream them, and dream them I do. I like my shorts, they are comfortable, easy to wear, and cause one to think a lot
Love ya, E-M xxx
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Very clever use of title and poem, i really like how this was presented. Thank you for entering the contest
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I like how the title and poem could be read as completely seperate or one rolling into the other, that's nice. The last two lines were wonderfully expressed Good luck in the contest and take care x
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