Running,
Circled by victims,
Shedding their secrets,
Look me in my eyes I'm slowly dying.
Callous,
The source of all this pain,
The windings of blood trails,
Make me change my mind I'm slowly dying.
Starving,
Starting a new day,
Loving it this way,
Look me in my eyes I think I’m slowly dying
(chorus)
Thank you for your selfish cycle,
Put me in a new asylum,
Save me from my hollow hideout,
I need another sign it's vital.
At the edge of my hand and I'm bearing, a new escape.
Author notes
needs a bit of work, but i like what i have so far.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I definitly like this. You've got tons of talent, and I like what you write about.
This could be shaped into a true masterpiece, I think you have it in you.
(:
Kaitttt
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interesting...not heard anything from you in ages. I like whats here so far. Nicely done
xxx
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Definitely an interesting piece.
The imagery is quite nicely written as well, great job (:
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