Nothings wrong
Whats the matter
Is it something I said
Leave me alone
I'm lost in my head
My mind is racing
Thoughts are many
Your not aloud in
Their mine to tally
Whats the matter
Everything she says
My world is crashing
The noise of voices
Why so many
Leave me to sort
Through this mess
Be there to pick me up
After I get things off my chest.
Nothings wrong
Time to sleep
Nothing is wrong
I just need to weep.
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Yes, that is it exactly. In a nutshell. This piece describes perfectly,just a little of what it is like to go through a depression.
I like the bombardment of the words, that are seemingly fired off at the reader. Very very good indeed. Felt the emotion in this a lot.
Well done and keep writing.
All the best
Wayne Leon
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Thank you for taking the time to read my thoughts
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Nice
That is like exactly what depression feels like i wouldent really change much with this poem keep up the good work
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