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Her secret

Lovely Dena simply waits
And as she does she contemplates
She wants a lover kind and warm
To love her perfect curving form
Her long red hair and pretty face
Could lead her to a special place
She licks her lips and softly sighs
For me she holds a great surprise
Her body she holds bare and free
And lies in wait for little me...




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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 20, 2008
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    Hmmm, who are you?? LOL I like this. I think you have definitely captured some thoughts that I hold, so it goes with not only the picture, but what I was looking for too. Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    Well Lucky Dena.
    This was another sweet write by you.

    Best wishes in this contest.
    Tory