once i thought i heard you sing
... on high
i'd visualize you ... those pristine wings
all a-flutter in a star-streaked sky
... when all was well
but when you fell ...
you damaged your most beloved things
did it sting ...
being pinioned ... unable to fly
descending into unhallowed hell?
... i couldn't tell
but wished i could have said goodbye ...
A contest entry
- Broken Angels ♥ by Andi..
390 points, ended January 28, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
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The descent is, well, decent. Clearly, though, if you read my poems, you'll see that they are better
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Good golly gosh... Descriptive. Very descriptive. And emotional. Love the last line. It speaks volume. Any angel in particular? LOL
DEZ
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secberm
Thanks dude ...ur always so encouraging
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