fields of wheat and barley
dancing in the breezes
savor the melody
sifting through her thoughts
and she is lonely
narrow hearts and wilted dreams,
an organized and uncompromising life
await her return
put on hold, just for this moment
and she is lonely
A contest entry
- picture prompt # 2 by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended January 19, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully expressive but over the 30 words limit... x
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Oh sorry! I was thinking of another contest and wrote ten lines
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the contest said 30 words. This was simply clear



