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Fields of Wheat and Barley

fields of wheat and barley
dancing in the breezes
savor the melody
sifting through her thoughts

and she is lonely

narrow hearts and wilted dreams,
an organized and uncompromising  life
await her return
put on hold, just for this moment

and she is lonely

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  • Lavender Butterfly
    January 19, 2008
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    Beautifully expressive but over the 30 words limit... x


  • Aurielle
    January 19, 2008
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    the contest said 30 words. This was simply clear