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Expressionless

Abandoned,
destitute of being.
Expressionless,
barren of emotion.
Spiritless,
life force diminishing.
Worthlessness,
no personal value.


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  • DarkHunter
    March 2, 2008

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    This is the perfect description of emptiness, there are no better words than these. I think this is excellent.  

  • Foreverstars
    January 20, 2008

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    That was a great poem. You used the 20 words to full advantage and I can feel that emptiness from here. Good luck in the contest. This is really great.