Broken weary
Hurt and battered
Life...pointless
Dreams are shattered
A contest entry
- Prompt 10x10 by whispernthedark.
495 points, ended January 19, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice?
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It can be hard to see the light at the end of the tunnel when you feel the back of the world has been turned towards you. I have been knocked down a peg or 2 here and there so I can totally relate to your feelings! I hope you have found or will find better days coming your way! It is amazing how so few words can say so much! You really have the knack for putting words together!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest. -
oh i love that comment downthere...and i agree hun stay strong...
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time will heal your broken wings--soon you shall soar above your mountains of desparaged hope
L T Y,
Joe
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Great take on the prompt. Thank you so much for sharing and entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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A very enjoyable read. You have written a wonderful piece of poetry and I wish you well in this contest.
Kelli
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