Life is spun
with the rising sun
‘til the day is done,
sunset’s race is run,
and life is gone...
A contest entry
- Empty- 20 words-PIF by Cannonsfire.
400 points, ended February 3, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments?
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Great words twin sis,
Live it with a smile and a lot of love.
God bless
Slán Dolores xx
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This is woven tight and breathes wisdom.
Wonderful take on the prompt. Blue
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This may be a short poem but it has a lot of meanings. You use the rhyme well and it flows really good. Don't stop writing
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Whew....wow!
That was FAAAST!!
I Love It!
I hope you win, but you won't need it!
((That Sun is Fabulous, reminds me of that Sublime Cover..Fourty Ounces..? Anyway, It's something I'd put up right here, in my family room)).
Loves,
Jin
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A nice little monorhyme you have written here. Love the piece itself, and it almost looks like a sun too.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Kelli
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