Deprived of human touch,
punished with seclusion.
Doomed by circumstance,
apathy permeates my mind.
Dependence holds me here,
hate eats into my heart.
My arms are lonely,
love is a memory.
Author notes
Bad man, bad marriage
A contest entry
- Heavy Sighs by Cinnarry.
2500 points, ended January 28, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering the contest
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the pain is so obvious in what you share here, the images of isolation and sorrow become an echo within this readers heart, longing for your ache to end - no one should be alone, no one should live without love in their lives. such vivid emotional colors on display within this poem.
blessings and best wishes,
~r.
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I can connect to this piece of poetry, very well. I love its presentation and the write. All good to me.
I wish you to do well in the contest.
Kelli
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