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Hollow Moans

Gas gauge amnesia
haste to fill stomach's void,
sputtering consequences,
hollow moans
strolling with gas can
growling insides,
abyss unfilled.

A contest entry

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    HEHE this is funny Dear I like it
    Well written piece.
    I hope you do well with this poem in the contest.
    Redwing Spirit