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Evacuated

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...womb
of unfulfilled
yearning


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In a list

A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    March 4, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a powerful short creation. Congratulations on the silver

  • Virgoan
    January 29, 2008

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    Frans, this is a very good take on the prompt. I like the brevity of this one...there is an echo within its emptiness.

    Thanks for sharing and keep writing my friend.

    HENSLEY


  • Idle Mind Wondering silver member
    January 20, 2008
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    very well done!

    A fine example of brevity.

    Ken


  • Blue Rew silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    and no need to elaborate on this thought.
    wonderful take on emptiness. Blue


  • Kelli Marie
    January 19, 2008

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    WOW...I just read a pixiku that said so much in so few words...this is marvelous to say the least. I wish you to do well in the contest.
    Kelli

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