Tickle my fancy...
tawdry thoughts
sinfully caressed
the wanton waltz
in harlequin dreams...
Author notes
Rambling thoughts on a Saturday morning...
Picture Credit: Check out by =girltripped @ deviantart
A contest entry
- Quickie; 13 words 20 minutes 10 entries by Exodus.
300 points, ended January 19, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awesome work here, friend.
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Exquisite!
You have taken and run away with the vocabulary in this wondrous work. The picture you've painted is an excellent replica of the art work. Brilliant work dear brother! It is good to see you writing again. I loved the vivid imagery penned in this writ.
All My LOVE ♥
Renee
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Oh My!!
Wonderful piece You have penned Brother
Wanton waltz
harlequin dreams...
Oy~
Yep~~ those words grab
Nice to see that quill dancing again!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Only you Greg, Only you
Sounds like one heck of a day to start off with, let me know how it ends
It's nice to see you penning again hon..
All the best
~Joy
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well done...well chosen words...almost romantic yet raw...and powerful....could almost envision these words dripping from her mouth! Good Luck Greg!
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this is a wonderfulrite and i love the unique touch and feel to it. well done and keep penning
and best of luck in furture comps
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You just had to go and use one of my favourite words ever!
This was a wonderful take on the prompt, unique but not too abstract. Thank you
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Love the title - very tempting as the last line
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Yesss :)
Very sensual and seductive and so beautifully worded
To answer the first line of your poem; I'd be happy to! 
All the best to you in this contest!!!!!
I think it's purty
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