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Thanks To A Friend

 

 

 

For once you have me at a loss
With you Jeff I could not be cross
Although you're green there is no moss
Thanks for being my friend

You always know just what to do
When I'm down and feeling blue
Few words spoken, always true
I know you'll be my friend

You've taught me much I didn't know
What path to take which way to go
You pick me up when I am low
You'll always be my friend

Thank you xx

 

 

 

Author notes

This was written as a comment on a poem Jeff wrote for me, I decided to post it. Below is the link to his poem. Thanks again Jeff.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3822315

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  • ronnica
    January 24
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    What better way to rejoice a friend than with a poem
    posted for the world to see.


  • moonbumps silver member
    January 20

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    That Jeff is a little diamond and I'm sure his face wiill light up when he reads this....thank God for friends like Jeff babes-oh, and by the way-I enjoyed the poem too babes.xxx


  • arafura
    January 19
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    Lovely tribute to a special friend. I know he will be thrilled by this! Well done!


  • LostInTheDream
    January 19

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    GREAT!

    This is an awesome write for showing your true feelings about caring for a dear friend. I really liked the style you used, and when you decided to rhyme. It worked really well! Nicely done!!!
    +- Omni

  • Perception
    January 19

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    I like what you are saying, but I'm not sure if I liked how it rhymed. The rhyming took away all the flow and rhythm.

    But what you were saying was beautiful, and most loving.

    Great job!

  • PassionsPromise gold member
    January 19
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    indeed how nice it is to see such a friendship.

    blessings to you both

    tory

  • Yvette Champ
    January 19

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    A sweet and devoted verse
    To proffer thanks to a friend
    The sincerity felt
    For no words were terse

    The bridge of two
    Who both journey in rhyme
    Extending the other a hand
    And reasons to feel fine

    A friend that doesn't grow moss
    That is there come what may
    Is a friend to depend on
    Given thanks for in a poetic way

    . Rewarded 6


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    January 19

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    You've taught me much I didn't know
    What path to take which way to go
    You pick me up when I am low
    You'll always be my friend

    This is a wonderful heart with a tribute of deep in nature and beautiful in venture..well done...

  • Puppydog gold member
    January 19

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE!

    I also have found so many wonderful people here on this site and am deeply blessed for having met them even if it has only been by written word. I am always amazed just how much we share as a group and in some instances form a very close bond.


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 19

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    And what a good friend he is. This has been a very emotional time for many of us here at AP and to know there are people who will stand by us through thick and thin is a blessing. Thank you for posting this poem. Love, Lane

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