Beneath lavender scents
you whisper delicate
words of pleasure.
My heart flutters
like the softest butterfly wings
and I believe
with an acute sense
of knowing,
the true beauty
of your devotion.
My fragile, crystal spirit
you hold,
as a rose petal of love
and you hear the plea
from my heartbeats
with mystic clarity.
I soar to paradise
under the tender glaze
of your hands,
the aroma of
your soothing touch
is all I will ever need.
I relish my good fortune
finding you,
for you are more priceless
than I can express.
Author notes
Option 3 Wordbank
Words Used In Order - LAVENDER, WHISPER, DELICATE, PLEASURE, FLUTTER, BELIEVE, ACUTE, BEAUTY, CRYSTAL, ROSE, LOVE, PLEA, MYSTIC, SOAR, GLAZE, AROMA, RELISH.
17 out of 30 words used.
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- It's My Birthday! Help Me Celebrate!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
1050 points, ended January 28, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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This was beautiful. I loved the choice of words you used from the word bank, they went so well together. This read like a perfect love poem, full of effection, devotion and purity. I just felt a wave of compassion whilst reading this, I wanted to be held and loved! Beautiful. -
this is such a beautiful write and made me smile as i read it i loved it well done and best of luck in the contest gran
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This is gorgeous, it made my heart sigh... what magical love you pen here, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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