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Forgive but, Never Forget

You compare your life with mine
But what the fuck do you know?

You know nothing of my pain
Nothing of my anger or hatred
You have no knowledge of my self battles

You question my forgiveness

But the real question is this:

Could you forgive someone,
Who has done a great wrong?

Can you find it in your heart,
To help those who cannot help themselves?

Who is stronger, you or me?
Who is weaker, them or you?
Who will win, them or me?

Who is stronger?
Me because I found the strength
I let go of the anger and hatred

Who is weaker?
Them for committing the crime
Unable to stop themselves

Who will win?
That I cannot answer
The answer will always change

You ask me how
I can do the things I do
I tell you now:

I do it because
If I don't
They will win

I will destroy myself
And those around me

If I can forgive them
Then I have the ability
To never forget and walk away

If I accept what happened
Then I have the right
To move on with my life

Be honest and tell me what you think.

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  • GiveMeTheGun
    January 23, 2008

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    girl, you took the words right out of my dirty fucking mouth.. i bookmarked this.. i swear it's as if i wrote it, that is EXACTLY how i feel in my life right now.. stay strong lil birdi!

    and as for the honest critiques you asked for:
    "You don't know of my self battles"
    that could be worded differently, perhaps 'You know nothing of the wars in me" or something, i don't know, it's a suggestion.
    "I let go if the anger and hatred"
    if should be of.

    pure honesty right there, chica. love ya and miss ya!