The lady with such a big heart,
right now feels she's falling apart.
Only bits and pieces left behind,
for her poor soul, now to find.
She fears that now she will be,
left with a gaping hole for all to see.
She searches hard with all her mite,
but the pieces she won't find tonight.
Only time will heal her head,
she don't give up, she fights instead.
No comfort can she find at all,
staring at a dark blank wall.
If only she would rest her head,
upon a pillow on the bed.
This turmoil, might just cease,
and morning, bring a bit of peace.
Author notes
my thoughts right now!
A contest entry
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awww wow powerful and emotional piece, great job on gold =)
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i understand this feeling all to well. i really injoyed reading this poem and i love how it flows. you did a wonderful job writing this. what ever is going on i hope things get better for you.
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i feel your pain sweet soul. you have expressed it so well. it sounds so simple to just rest your mind, but it is a struggle during times like these.
many blessings and *stomps
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OH THOSE TERRIBLE NIGHTS!!!
I believe all of us have had these nights where we could not sleep but only think of the things that bother us so much.
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oh sweetie, rest your weary head. It is snowing at my house make you smile! You wrote this so well even with a head ache now thats class girl!!!
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I know this place. That Sun takes forever on nights like that. I hope you find peace before it decides to shine.
The third stanza stands out. It reveals alot about the thought processes when we all have nights.
Love,
Jin
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Wow!!
Good work again Ellan. Frustrating, anger and bitterness convey the feelings you shared in this work.Things will get better, trust me!
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