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broken wings

black abyss these hallowed thoughts
amid a flurry of wings
broken
of dreams of flight
crashed and burned
no solace here
no ending
blinded horizons left
in this darkness
and shadow cloaked despair
of broken wings and dreams of flight

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    and shadow cloaked despair
    of broken wings and dreams of flight


    you have expressed this life but through the power ful immages..well done....


  • infinitechaos07
    January 19, 2008

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    Very good write here, nice flow and use of imagery. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!