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Still Loving You

My nights blur into days.
My days seem not to exist.
I have no will over my soul
Beacuse I'm wanting you to love me.

I'm holding on to
Something I never had,
And it's tearing me apart
To know things will never be the same.

I can't eat.
I can't sleep.
I can barely breathe
Because I'm still loving you.

It's silly,
Foolish,
Even childish,
But there's no letting you go.

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  • deleteduser
    March 7, 2008

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    I've felt this way before, but there truly is no love like God's love. That was my help, and knowing there is someone perfect for me somewhere. Great way to pour out your heart.

  • eternal-devotion
    January 29, 2008

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    Very intense.

    This is a very intense poem about the one you feel very much about. I feel that we all have those intense feelings at times in our lives. Sometimes they work out sometimes not. However even when they don't there is more surprises comming later on in life so don't ever give up on yourself as the day will come when the absolutely right person will come along and you will wonder what all the rest really ment to you. You did a splendid job with as you wrote it. I enjoyed reading it.


  • KillerRain
    January 21, 2008
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    still painfully heartwreanching