The topic of this poem focuses on misguided teens who need enlightment and direction.
Dare you whisper at a time like this!
Stand with your hands folded no more!
Free these thoughts from your own abyss
And unlock the secrets from your door!
Hold no mockery or folly in your place
Keep a straight and honest face!
What say you for the company you keep
Betraying friends of deceit?
Lies and jealousy to pass the time
A game you practice all in your mind!
To share with loved ones
And dear ones fair
All of life is unaware!
That in your hands you hold your heart
And you careless for those who start
To trust and believe in you
Care and follow every word
You speak whether
Deep or hollow!
What say you of the person your with?
Dare you whisper at a time like this!
Look in the mirror
And riddle me this!
Who is this person you say
Your with?
You?
A contest entry
- BE A VOICE FOR THE VOICELESS. by flaed.
1000 points, ended January 22, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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There are a few mistakes ...
One of the mistakes I found:
"Stand with you hands folded no more"
Should be:
"Stand with your hands folded no more"
There is like no punctuation or structure, but it has great meanign behind it.
"To share with loved ones,
Dear ones fair."
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eh ok . what toppic?
who are you being a voice for./
its moving. but not overly inspiring.
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eh huh!
You spelled topic wrong?...mmmm Yeah! I think so!
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