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Poetry, Like Love...

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Shadows call out to me

when vulnerability seeps in
under my veil,

for, it knows well of my blank canvas.

If I could only pen petals
pulsating passion;
letting love color my imagination

anything but black,

but my words,
they follow breezes
and leave me here, dangling

-somewhere in between-

watching fireflies play
in clandestine corners
where constellations refuse to shine.

I could borrow brush
and beat old memories to death
to free my fingers;
rip out my heart
to find shreds of emotion
to feed fate's fancy,

but poetry, like love,

cannot be forced
or left gathering dust
beneath dried flowers
of a bride's maid bouquet.

It must be nurtured,
given room to bloom
flowing in perfect rhythm

to the shape of a heart.









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  • Sameo
    June 4

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    Awesome

    As true as the words are, poetry like love must be nutured cos' there always a meter in the course of nature.
    It that does not tend toward life bends to death.
    Awesome piece here.
    I like it.


  • michael thomas
    July 6, 2008
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    very nice poem.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 24, 2008
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    Perfect in everyway lol congrats on the Gold and Bronze lol

  • Michael P gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Congratulations on the Gold! A wonderful poem and well deserving, in my opinion (also) I can think of no better person to judge a contest than TEN-she realy has a brilliant young mind-(don't tell her I said that)and (my opinion) she picked the best poems to place for this contest-I myself am just now grasping the underlying complexity of this poem-I got it all wrong the first time that I read it---again congrats...well done...peace


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    Just taking another gander before the final judging. Again, I am so totally moved. You touch a personal chord and just phrase this so beautifully.


  • Peteskid gold member
    April 9, 2008

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    will have to read the gold in this contest, a splendid writing here, simple and honest but so compelling, the quiet feelings rise to urgency in a skillful crescendo here...so very well done...PK

  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    April 9, 2008
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    You have me immediately with those first four lines--A poem of volume in those few words! I hear you.

    You made such fantastic connection with the --in between--. You have penned beauty and heartache, struggle and understanding.

    Loved this:

    but poetry, like love,

    cannot be forced
    or left gathering dust

    Just beautifully done!

  • Michael P gold member
    March 28, 2008
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    It has been too long since I read your poetry, my loss, indeed this poem's, so well written. You have taken the dreaded writer blocked blank canvas and brought it to life -very respectably- I loved your choice of words and their moods portrayed-well done I wish you the best.

  • tara wilson gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    this is so beautiful, Lynda.. wonderful imagery, emotion, and thoughts.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 19, 2008

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    Nice Poem :)

    I really love this stlye from you care free and your own tempo and free style poem from you Aunt Lynda. what really impresses me is your intriquicate style ands wording through out this poem. you really shioft and change your qords quite beautifuly. keep up the good work and good luck


  • Frozentearz
    January 19, 2008

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    Top notch

    As always your words come alive, they breath a life of their own as you continue to share your wisdom through words,
    This was some fantastic work,
    Thanks for sharing,
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    So True,

    You have touched this reader's senses,
    as I find such honesty, and fact of poetry flow from
    your pen within sweet sis. Thanks for sharing you!
    All the best within the contest!

    Peace, poeticweaver~ xo


  • wakingdevil
    January 19, 2008

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    This is seriously one of the best poems I hv ever read in free verse.The alliterations were rly beautiful and the imaginative descriptions were breathtaking!!The thought u put into this was profound....Thanks for entering and best of luck


  • Three Doves
    January 19, 2008

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    as your heartbeat sounds it's natural tune so too do your poetic words of love. Much pleasure brought forth in your work as i notice a feather falling from the ceiling.


  • kaibab silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    Sounds this this angel poet is ready to wake up and let her fingers soar the heavens...lovely dance of syllables here...


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 19, 2008

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    Sooo very beautiful, hon
    A fine sharing into this contest
    I wish you all the very best!


  • Fug-azi
    January 19, 2008

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    Sis if this is how you write when you can't write then perhaps you need to have a few more blocks ... one that has to be bookmarked by me.


  • penman gold member
    January 19, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very well done. A creative and wonderful expression. Best of luck in the contest.


  • jasminerose
    January 19, 2008

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    To have the feeling of emptiness consuming your muse can be distressing to ones heart. I would have to say from this poem, your muse is beautifully plentiful flowing feelings into others in the shape of a heart! Beautiful poem~sigh
    I wish you all the best in the contest my friend
    Jazzy


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 19, 2008

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    WOW! Lynda, I am speechless! You weave such a brilliant quilt of beauty within the thought. I love the feel of this piece! Such tender and vibrant conviction beaming through these lines. Just lovely!


    And this...

    "but my words,
    they follow breezes
    and leave me here, dangling

    -somewhere in between-

    watching fireflies play
    in clandestine corners
    where constellations refuse to shine."

    Just had to outline these... Excellent piece my dear!!!


  • tomisb
    January 19, 2008

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    Words seep into the consciousness or burst like a bud alive and fully blossomed. Images delight and other times haunt. You have done a beautiful spell of the way that we are wafted to a tenderness of the spirit when we allow ourselves to be written. Love, Tom B.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 18, 2008
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    Ah when the muse speaks of not having utterance. It is in fact speaking.
    Nice


    • poet2angels gold member
      January 18, 2008
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      awwww ty, my friend Such a nice comment helps me so much right now

      Lynda

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