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To Suffer.

I lie here,

clutching my chest.

 

My bleeding heart

turned black.

 

The way he

looked at me

 

The way he

spoke to me

 

As if we were

the only two people

in the entire world.

 

The way he told me

he was mine.

 

The way he said

he loved me. 

 

It was all for nothing.

It was all for granted.

 

My soul, black as night

will fade into nothingness.

 

For he just as well

murdered me.

 

He took my life

and threw it away.

 

Like plummeting down from

the highest point of a cliff

into the cold, sharp waters below.

 

The pain it causes me,

I mite as well die here.

 

Does he know

what he has caused me?

 

Yes he knows,

and he would do it again. 

 

A black tear

A black heart

A black soul

Will suffer no longer.

Author notes

When it hurts this bad you just want to die. Another one for the bastard.




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  • xXBrutalRomanceXx
    September 28, 2008

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    wow this is great! you did a wonderful job. this is what i was looking for. good luck and thnx for your entry.


  • Spiritual Nature
    January 27, 2008

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    The pain of a lover who turns away from us, abandoning our very souls. We have all suffered this death and most...many times. You did a great job of expressing that darkness that you are left holding in your heart. Thank you for entering my contest and sharing this piece. Blessings, Doris


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Fab piece, you've shown your pain and upset well. Couple of typos but other than that very well penned Good luck in the contest


  • Crimson Blaze
    January 19, 2008

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    i am so glad i found you. you are a really good writer.
    i've read a few of your poems on here and they are great..
    keep it up
    looking forward to reading more


  • infinitechaos07
    January 18, 2008

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    Oh man, I love this. I feel that way right now! You write so wonderfully, almost makes me jealous =) Thanks for entering my contest, best of luck!

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