Midwinter wrongs the rights of springs
Desire in violent overture
Painted over a mosaic world
For beauty is always cruel...
Like a siren whispering soft promises
Drifting across the silent winds
Will my temptation give way to desolation?
Oh pariah of twisted beauty
Oh sweet Adonis!
My misguided suicide
My scar-riddled symphony of crimson regret
All apparent on the Arctic tongue of Bel
Defiled perfection
In the shape of chaotic innocence
Bleed from my now frozen wounds
Pleading for redemption
On the twisted nails of fate
Understanding through pain
Knowledge through tears
Fulfill me!
My soul screams with the echo of ages past
Manannan Mac Liyr can no longer hide me from myself. Not here. This barren wasteland of frozen dreams. Dead to the world. To tease dynastic union and beget them further maniacs, Oh this world of parallel mirrors in sadistic unity. Oh mother Goddess, Danu, Glorious creator, Beautiful destructor, tear the tainted flesh from my soul and let it be reborn. But first it must die. This is the price of the key to Bel's gate. Beat me, cut me, bleed me, ravish me
And I scream...
I scream until land and sea clash in a shadowed dance of brilliant defiance.
But winter has just begun...
...and the winters are long
Author notes
There really is no set pattern of writting in this one. It's just a writting, and this is how it came out on paper. It was my first writting in SF after a long dry spell. 009 encouraged me to write it. SO here it is.
Written November 12th, 2003
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Comments
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YEs winter is upon singing its' frigid song laughing silently delivering those icy smiles from a weavless sky. Yes winter is my time to shine and I'm glad you put it all in perspective for us. Thanks again.
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*cocks head to one side a little* i do.. like it, but it isn't my favorite pice of yours, but that's okay. But i really like these few lines:
"My misguided suicide
My scar-riddled symphony of crimson regret
All apparent on the Arctic tongue of Bel
Defiled perfection
In the shape of chaotic innocence"
and
"Understanding through pain
Knowledge through tears"
^THis is really powerful right here. but do we as humans truly understand? we are but mear humans.
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Wow.
Pleading for redemption
On the twisted nails of fate
Understanding through pain
Knowledge through tears
Fulfill me!
I really loved that..stanza? Sorry, i'm really new to this. But that was really well written. Thank you for sharing.
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Ah
I agree and winter has just begun
I really liked and enjoyed this
I thank you for sharing and I am glad you posted it
BTW Nice to meet you and come visit me too won't you?
Blessings
Susan~~~~
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