Sometimes I lay here
Holding my...
breath
Until I forget
That I'm supposed to...
breathe
It's killing me
You're killing me
I wait for you
Endlessly
CAN'T YOU SEE
WHAT YOU'RE DOING TO ME???
Just slit my wrists now
It'd be so much less painful
Just blind me
Just take me
And make me
Wish I were dead...
And when I wake up
Clear The Thoughts from my head
Finally I'm breathing
Author notes
I can't even tell you how much it hurts. >.<
A contest entry
- Bleed For Me... by infinitechaos07.
600 points, ended February 1, 2008, 27 entries
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i think that we all feel like that sometimes! i know i do pratically all frickin' day! great poem! thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you!
NineTailedFox -
this is good i like the message and the text placement hehe
thanks for entering my contest -
that's really good. i have those moments too. it sucks. good luck in the contest and i'm here if you ever need to talk, k? <3
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Wow this is really good... I've been there a few times myself before. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck!
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