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Hurricanes and H-e-r-o-e-s

Slashes like wedding night bliss.
Cocaine lips and lemonade,
she never had a chance [baby.]
Eyes closed to this charade.





A contest entry

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  • xTomorrowx
    February 8, 2008

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    Short but great, I really like it...
    I don't really know what to say, congrats on the silver
    Good luck in the next round and all the rest


  • And Hyetal
    February 5, 2008

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    Imagery: 1 point
    Theme: 1 point
    Use of Form/Flow: 1 point
    Other criteria: 1 point
    Overall Appeal: 1 point

    When I finished this poem, I just went "hmm". This write boggles the mind but ensnares the scences. (Did I just quote a Harry Potter movie there? )

    Anyways, I could smell the night air and feel the hurricane's wind and taste the lemonade. This was just beautiful and just...wow.

    5 points for Team Sonneteer!

    ~Cassie