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Kittens

Kittens are so tiny
to pick up in our arm
when we cradle the kitty
there is not the harm.

To hold the kitten
we feel the soft fuzzy fur.
When they snuggled in our arm
they begin to purr.

Kittens are colorful.
They come in black, white,
tan, gray, and brown.
They aren't bright.

It's so cute to see
the kittens play
with the small ball
or they just roll it away.

Some kittens
will sit or lay on the lap.
In the afternoon
some kittens takes a nap.

When the kittens see
a black fly.
They look or pounce,
and they walks by.

They look or smell.
If the kittens sneaks out.
They might run away
a little doubt.

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I love kitties so much.

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  • Kelli Marie
    March 22, 2008

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    A very endearing piece of poetry. Kittens are so cute, but their claws sure are painful. You did great.
    Kelli


  • goddesskevauna
    February 26, 2008

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    Awww! How cute! I feel like I just shnuggled your kitty! Makes you love kitties just even more!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 12, 2008

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    Haha Beautiful

    I had to laugh at this a few times because as I reread your poem a few times this brought to mind and conjured up some images of my own little wild kittens I care for which always pounced on bugs or flies and on the really cold nights when I was feeding them at night before the raccoon came my breath would come flying out as I talked to them and wlel they looked up to watch my breath disappear it was funny. any ways a wonderful heart felt poem and I really enjoyed reading this alot. you realkly touched all of our hearts with this poem. keep up the good work =)


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    Me, too, (love kitties). Outstanding poem about my favorite subject--cats and kittens! Your poem has feeling and beauty and a great understanding of kittens. Really enjoyed reading this one!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    This is so cute I love kittens to they love you no matter what unlike humans who can be idiots lol.Thanks for sharing much love


  • stinkletoes
    January 21, 2008

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    I have 3 kitties, and booboo likes to sneak out. I really enjoyed reading your poem. thank you for sharing it.


  • Miss Chievous
    January 21, 2008
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    So Cute! I love kittens! Great rhymes!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    awwwww this is such a beautiful write and take on the kittens and i could just image it in my mind. beautifully written with such tenderness well done and keep penning


  • ShelleyA gold member
    January 19, 2008

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    A very nice poem about your love for kittens. Nice imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. You express your feelings for kittens very well in this piece. An enjoyable read.

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