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Dotted Lines

Virgin pen

dipped in trust's well

scribbles compulsion.

 

Seduction's cannibal lips

kiss with

asp inclinations,

victims bitten,

convinced it's love.

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Prompt - Insidious Attributes

20 words

A contest entry

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    January 18, 2008

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    Ohh, now I do like this piece alot. Very well done. It has a bite of its own. Excellent job here

  • Liquid memories
    January 18, 2008

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    hummmmmmmmm love those cannibal lips, though i may stand back to jkeep from getting bitten. you did it again, along dotted lines. success.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    This is a great take on the prompt thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much love always