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Hope

Heaven sent
Optimistic dream
Perplexing expectation
Everlasting belief

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I'm starting to really like these 'acrostic' poems
Written November 12th, 2003

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    March 8, 2005
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    Very good!

    This acrostic is lovely and brings out the meaning of the word "hope" in a wonderfully true way. Lovely background as well.


    Charishma


  • DragonessTawnya
    January 8, 2004
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    Great

    I like it a lot. Short, but you described hope very well. I like the line "Perplexing expectation"...sometimes that is all hope is. Things that seem so impossible really can happen. I love this poem.
    ~Tawnya~


  • J Rhys Davies
    December 2, 2003
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    Excellent description of what HOPE is all about. so much said, with so little written. Great job.

  • GypsyDreamer
    November 18, 2003
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    Hope summed up in a neat little package. A beautiful acrostic and the wording is perfect.

    Love those flowers too!
    Gypsy


  • November 15, 2003
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    Fathers gift
    Always can be ours
    Inviting belief
    Tenet
    Hope



    I love acrostic poetry also...this is beautiful


  • Kalexi
    November 12, 2003
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    Lovely acrostic, and a beautiful background , very inspiring

    Take care,

    Karen


  • Samplette gold member
    November 12, 2003
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    Hope...a wonderful thing to have and a wonderful acrostic. YOu say very much within these eight words.
    Very good.
    Sam

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