After taking insults
Receiving the bad
Somewhere inside she stills holds hope
Her heart full of gold
Her spirit soars
Above the others she knows
She does not care
She is too happy
What happened to her sorrow?
Her green eyes sparkle
Her smiles glows
Unlike the rest around her
I want to know
I need to learn
How to attain her hope
Author notes
so happy i'm so worn out..the world is not a happy place....and my poem is sort of happy and it's written from 3rd person...i normally don't have any person at all...that was hard XD
A contest entry
- The opposite of your usual style of poetry by Loveandblessings2u.
950 points, ended January 25, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) Pt. 3 by whispernthedark.
435 points, ended March 1, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very well written, great poem. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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hahahaha good poem!!!! you, writing about being happy and having hope hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting...... well, congrats on the honorable winner!!! I like this actually, it is very uplifting!
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This is really good, it's not so much happy as it is, well... hopefull, which is something many of us could learn to be. Great job. Good luck!
~ Kit
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thank you!
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This poem has such a really good flow to it,
I have no favorite part,
I very much enjoyed the whloe piece.
Your ending was truly remarkable, great writing.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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thank you!
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