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Your eyes are of cold dust
old and not used,
for you have brooken them
for your own privalage,
to see the unspooken,

for kevin, the allknowing, all lying,

tell me if you read it

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  • pretty-sweet
    March 18, 2008

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    good

    1. You was words that give you a isual of what is goign on...of her feelings
    2. Privalge?...what are you talking about you never really said what it was that they had broken....I guess your talking about feelings.

  • pretty-sweet
    January 30, 2008
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    it rymed, and i wouldn't want to meet kevin, well he should no that right


  • im only half empty
    January 20, 2008
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    Very well written...I know this feeling a little all to well.