you went and lived your life,
you went and refused Christ.
now you're down in Hell,
and i'm here now wishing you well,
i wish you well, i wish you well, i wish you never fell!
You scream in pain,
you take his name.
everyone learns faster on fire,
you wish you were never a lier,
weren't a lier, weren't a lier, now you burn in fire!
You thought it wouldn't be so bad,
now you realize and become mad.
i'll help you this one last time,
i'll releave you of this crime,
of this crime, of this crime, one last time!
Cuz i'm an angel of prayer,
all you say i can hear.
you intended to burn,
now you wear a scorn,
wear a scorn, wear a scorn, for you burn!
Hear me sing,
i'll carry you on my wings.
you will be saved,
because you took his name,
took his name, took his name,now you're saved!
Author notes
"Intending to burn, pretending to fight it, Everyone learns faster on fire, Things took a turn, lost all desire"-The Alkaline Trio
If you don't like it please criticize!!
A contest entry
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1006 points, ended March 15, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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It's "liar" not "lier"... small spelling mistake... this kind of sounded like a song... it was pretty good but some lines didn't rhyme and it threw me off... Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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Hear me sing,
i'll carry you on my wings.
you will be saved,
because you took his name,
took his name, took his name,now you're saved!
Indeed a thought provoking and very moving write is here..well done...
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