Damned- I walk- I reflect into my past
Very few will understand, the point I come from
Unending- Dammit!- Tortuously, I'm harrassed
And now the people use this as a hateful fulcrum
To maim me, and destroy the last peices of my shattered heart
But now the silloettes dissapear
Everyone's gone, my turn to depart
I know that she'll never come here
They still laugh -I still cry
One more time- Just one more time!
Wrists are bleeding- It twas I
This is me- my heart broken -at my prime!
If she doesn't want me
Then nobody shall
I'm breaking free
Forget the moral!
I'm going-
Going!
To the place that only sinner belong
Only because I couldn't take the rejection
Nothing can make it prolong
So take my heart for dissection!
For I need it not
She broke it.
I'll see her in hell.
A contest entry
- Dark Love Gone Bad by lordmalvok.
450 points, ended January 19, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Allpoetry Halloween Bash by Little Eagle.
12350 points, ended November 21, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Delishously morbid, eh?
Comments
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Well, this deals with darkness but not really what I was looking for as it has nothing to do with Halloween.
Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment
Happy Halloween and God Bless
Tammy
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"If she doesn't want me
Then nobody shall
I'm breaking free
Forget the moral!"
Nice work. Thanks for submitting this to my contest.
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Your spelling is deliciously morbid, too, lol. But your poem kicks ass. I like it quite alot actually. You had me wound up like the Energizer bunny, LOL. Good luck in the contest.
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Aha! I ran a spellcheck, and it's a-ok.
So...
You're wrong.
It was never wrong.
And thanks. XD
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