I’m boiling up inside,
I cant control my feelings
I cant cope any more
I don’t no what to do.
I need to release the pain,
how? you tell me?
It hurts so much inside
I can’t take it anymore
I want to slash my wrists,
so the energy of anger
and the pain can be released once again,
My body can take the pain,
but my mind can’t.
A contest entry
- Poetic Idol (Auditions) by TwilightBloodRuns.
315 points, ended June 8, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good. But you test the boudnaries of 'emo' poetry.
luckily i find it just within those boundaries.
Next round, try not using any self infliction of wounds, at least not physical ones.
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i know the feeling =S but very very very nice poem it screams feelings and emotion .x.
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I know this feeling very well. The pain seems insufferable and unbearable and never ending!! But... relief can come in many forms... for me the best things have been writing and talking to people about my feelings.. it truly does help.
I'm here on AP if you ever need a listening ear and a friend... take care hun!!
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