This is not love

Angry words
disrespect
nothing heard
same old game
this is not love
this is pain

Author notes

3. Other Random Quotes
"My mother has always been unhappy with what I do." -Mick Jagger

"I really didn't understand what all the yelling was about."
-Elvis Presley

"Happy families are all alike, but every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way."
-Leo Tolstoy

A contest entry

Quote Inspired Again by kill the lights. 600 points, ended January 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Critiques welcomed

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deathangle
September 10, 2008
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GOOD
I LOVE IT
- -LizBTropez-
  September 12, 2008
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  why thank you! someday I'll get to paying you back the favor!
celadia
February 14, 2008
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This was nice and short and to the point.
CharityVirtue
February 1, 2008

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Short
Simple
and so true!

Congrats on your green trophy.

I often wonder why love has to hurt sometimes.

Charity
kill the lights
January 19, 2008

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I'm not sure what to make of this. It's short, and it seems unfinsihed, but that's not a bad thing... the emotion is definitely there

thanks
xx Sin