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A Little Blue Tickle

There is a blue pig
outside my window,
calling to be let in. . .
I ignore him
and drink a cup
of green tea.
Pitiful oinking
comes from his
blue lips. . .
His piggy feet
tap the glass as he
looks sadly in. . .

"I'm a blue pig, Wolfie,

and the pink pigs won't

play with me...

can you spend some

time and play?

"Come on in", I tell him,

and I will tickle you pink. 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    January 25, 2008
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    lol...love this.
    thank you. Love, lane


  • arafura gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    clever...!

    Clever play with words and great fun to read... so that's what "tickled pink" means? lol! Good luck in the contest!