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Pigs vs. Swine

The blue bits of bacon
frothing with lubricated spit
found their way to the mouth
after the veins had split,
suckling hog hinds like fried chicken
on a Popsicle stick.

An intake of egg
fornicating
baked bread spotted blue.

The crisp delight
of snagging chunks
of animal fat
sizzling still
from a Palm Olive pan
into a cave of darkness,

a wet warmth,

a new home.

Blue swine
sat by the window
watching its brother's fate,
sinking hooves slowly
indent the ground
two by two they track mud
without realizing
human intuition.

Steadily hunted
for table dressings,

addition to the hips,

paper weight of the stomach,
mincing bones
like grits
with butter.

Smiling at the blue pigs,
snaggle tooth goodbyes
are the axe that falls
sure as mothers' nurturing,
sure as the squeal that follows.

"You'll never know how useful you are,"
the tail unravels as
the blue speckled fur is replaced with red.

 

Author notes

Pig is metaphorical for humans in the title.

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  • JohnnyD gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    I prefer blue bacon with my green eggs on a violet morning when blue pigs fly and dump all over my car.

    and as I slowly finish my breakfast and watch those big blue bastards oinking in the sky, I quietly steal out into the back yard and take the tarp off the Antiaircraft gun I purchased on E-bay from the USS New Jersey ($459.08 plus $1105.00 shipping), load a rack of shells and proceed to gleefully blow the hell out of those blue Oinkers. And now, I have to buy four more freezers from Sears as I have plenty of blue bacon. Pass the salt please?



    Gander


  • elemental angel
    January 20, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the prompt
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Bravo


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 18, 2008

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    oh, you must not have gotten my message way back when...you are the only one allowed to Reserve
    I know you work long hours - have fun at the movies.