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Two Days After the Fact

There’s still snow on the road
Two days after the fact-
I can disappear quick
Like a snap, but that snow just won’t go.

A contest entry

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  • Darianna
    February 7, 2008
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    I'm not quite sure if I like this as it is...it feels like there's more to the story than this. At the same time I can see the words hidden between the lines. Like you can leave, but the pain, the memories and all won't go away. I'm undecided on this.

    Thankyou for entering my contest, good luck.

    Dari xxx