In effortlessness,
your presence fills
the dry cracks of my heart; once a desert wasteland,
simply by the laughter
Haha-ing from your lips--
Laughing at my 'Oopsies!'
Milk spilt on your pants,
Covered in Shamrock,
a kiss for my forehead
Ceci vous êtes, Divine Romance~
Author notes
The last line says "This You Are, Divine Romance". =]
A representation of a silly moment with my husband, where Romance thrives. =]
A contest entry
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600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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This is just a sweet and tender write. I see that you have a lot of skills. I read more than one poem, the one with the lollipop, and another one, but this one i like most. Keep up the great work
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Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
I love this poem, its so romantic yet humorus too, I like the hahaing you have used and also the oopsies this is really cute, you have said so much in a few simple short lines as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Silly moments are sometimes, the most memorable. There is a song that talks about how his girlfriend backed his truck into something and crashed it, but the look on her face and the words that came out of her mouth, sent him bursting into laughter, that he couldnt even be mad at her for recking his truck... that is what your poem reminded me of. Love is born in these moments....
=) Criss
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WEll written
this is a great poem i love how you intertwine the languages....breaking a berrier -
soft romance
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awwww this is cute!
... i liked it... 
tres romantique? rusty french lol.
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no the "Divine Romance" line was intentionally in English lol.
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Enjoyed! Romance has an essence, a power that truly lives and breathes like an entity. Your wonderful write just drives this point home. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed.--Kel :
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Delightful and sweet. I love the playfulness of this. Very endearing and romantic as well. Well written.
Kelli
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