He was right.
It was me, he was describing.
Watching T.V., bills piled up.
Living paycheck to paycheck.
How did he know?
I wasn't lazy.
Just needed guidance, motivation,
someone to show me.
How to make a million
without leaving my house.
How did he know?
I was ready,
to have operators standing by.
Four easy payments
All major credit cards accepted.
Thirty days to examine, in my home.
If not completely satisfied,
money back,
minus shipping and handing.
Would be the last straw,
to break this camel's back !
How did he know?
My wife would be asleep
and couldn't stop me this time.
How did he know?
A contest entry
- Starting Again by Sia.
600 points, ended January 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hit me with EVERYTHING. PW OK! by z etoile.
375 points, ended March 28, 2008, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOL that was awesome those words are so repeated to us over and over again...
I loved this I loved how you penned this here in the poem... even the t.v. has temptation... scary huh?! -
Thanks for entering!!!!
Very good piece. Uplifting in a beautiful way. Good luck in the contest ^_^ @>}- -
smiling...oh, you are good.
I have put you
on my Favorites because I want to keep my eye
on you...this is delightful. What a stroke of
luck that you entered a contest of mine...Lane
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