Come with me,
come to the ball,
come with me,
please hear my call.
Everyone dance with much joy and delight,
Fairies all gathered a wonderful sight.
Come with me,
Come to the ball,
come with me,
fairies and all,
we'll reach the heights
and dance on through the stars,
sipping from acorns through spangly gorse.
Come with me,
come to the ball,
come with me,
fairies and all.
We'll have some fun
we will never forget,
so come with me,
come
to
the
ball.
Fairy love and sparkling wishes, Libithina x xx x
Author notes
An enchanted fairy ball, welcoming the Sweet Princess, fairy love and sparkling wishes for much happiness. Let me introduce myself I am in my irridescent gown of sparkling crystals and dewdrops. I have just seen you, you are the prettiest one in the whole room and everyone there is beautiful. Welcome little one, I will visit soon, with sooo much fairy love and sprinkles of golden fairy dust, LIBITHINA x xx
A contest entry
- The Grand Fairy Ball by Melodies.
600 points, ended January 28, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love fairies. I would love to go to a fairy ball. It sounds like the most wonderful and enchanting place in the world. Great write.
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Thankyou for sharing such a delightful piece of work. Your writings show a very happy, pixie like personality, and it's a good one to have =)
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Come With Me Come To The Ball
Beautifully written. This was such a nice refreshing poem to read. The imagery is beautiful and the feelings of the ambiance is awesome. I love the fairy's at the ball, Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing with me.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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I am so glad you found this to be a refreshing read thankyou for your lovely words great for me to hear all love Lib x x
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Very nice and sounds very gaelic. You have definitely found your niche. Happy trails
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I will gladly come with you, it sounds lovely. I will wear my new yellow daffodil dress and slipper wort sandels. LoL. Nice one libby,I like this. Val
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Wow Val
Stunning, daffodil yellow and slipperwort sandals, you will positively glow with sunshine, all love Lib x x
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thank you for this nice poem love genna
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Thankyou so much
my darling, I hope you are having a wonderful time at the fairy ball, love and sparkles, Libithina x x
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Superb Writing
First of all, I love the layout of this. Secondly, I love the rhyme. It is just wonderful. Thirdly, I love the way the repeating of the sentence: 'Come with me, come to the ball' seeps into the reader's mind. It is haunting, in a funny sort of way. This is a happy, joyful piece that was a pleasure to read. Well done indeed Lib.
Much love
Wayne Leon
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Thankyou, that is so very lovely to hear
I am thrilled that you liked it Wayne, love and sparkles Lib x x
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This is really sweet
You have done a nice job with this piece thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love
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Thankyou so much
for your lovely comments, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, I must rush I am being called to dance a fairy minuet love and sparkles, Lib x x
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Great shimmers of beautiful love...
Your entrance to the ball has caused many OOOOOOOOooooooooooooo's and Awwwwwwwwwwwwww's and your poem is being read aloud to all assembled. 
Every enchanted one is applauding and you may now take your well deserved bow for this splendid poem!
This is for you
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That has made me smile so very much
I loved your very kind praise, I am so glad that you liked my gown, I had it specially sparkled for the occasion. I am honoured for my poem to be read out to the magnificent assembly. I humbly take a bow, many sprinklings of golden magical faery dust, laced with sooo much love, Lib x x x
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An enchanted write, one that calls me to the ball...do I need a ticket? A very nice fantasy write. I liked the read.
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My lovely Kelle
No, you don't need a ticket, you would sparkle anywhere but at the ball, my you will be positively blinding, I will save a plate of chocette cake and dainties for you to nibble, much love and sparkles, faery love Lib x x x
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