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Would you...


Look at where we're at now,
A harsh word from goodbye,
Tell me how to fix it,
I still love you, I can't lie.
If I were to leave you,
What kills me most is this,
I don't know if you'd miss me,
Or even remember my kiss.
Would you notice
If I were to vanish?
Would you search for my face
In the crowd?
Would you wish
It all back in a heartbeat?
Would your tears
Be a monsoon of sound?
Would your lies
Become ghosts that now haunt you?
Would your anger
Dissolve into pain?
Would you yearn
For my arms wrapped around you?
Would days pass you by
All the same?

Well would you?


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  • plainoljoe
    January 19, 2008

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    no matter what the circumstances may be, at one point in time we all look back and remember the one that we let get away

    Joe


  • Billy Kage
    January 19, 2008

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    This flowed very nice. I know what ya mean though. It's always a wonder if someone is gonna miss you, as you miss them. I know right where you are at.


  • Twilight Moon
    January 18, 2008
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    I LIKE .. its emotional and its all u... rhymes well

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