Dead is one thing to call it
along with chivarly
and that fiery passion
that I once had
for
Crayolas
It's gone
and lost forever
I cannot miss
What I never had
A contest entry
- Come on in by Riftkin.
600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 16 entries
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interesting
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Your poem seems sad to me
It seems like you havew a desire for romantic fire, but that it has never come your way. Maybe it's not dead after all--maybe in your case it will just be a late bloomer! LOL
Cheers, anyway!
David
P.S.
I think the word you meant to use in the title was DESIST instead of DECIST--check it out!
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I couldn't help but chuckle of the fiery passion you had for crayolas...lol Sorry that it is lost forever, how sad that must be. Fun write.
Kelli
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