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Beyond The Breaking Point

Crack, slither, hopeless,
I am but a free form;
I am forever nothing.

A contest entry

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 18, 2008
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    wow!
    This one packs a punch for sure!
    Well done!
    All the best to you!


  • And Hyetal
    January 18, 2008
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    Imagery: 1 point
    Theme: 1 point
    Use of Form/Flow: 1 point
    Other criteria: 1 point
    Overall Appeal: 1 point

    Lovely! The whole thing flowed perfectly and your imagery and theme was so nice. Powerful words in only less than 20 words.

    5 more points for Team Ballader!

    Thanks for entering!

    Always,
    Cassie